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Average Rating: 5
Number of people who have voted: 3
6th Jun 2012, 5:09 AM

nice one. look forward to the next.

6th Jun 2012, 5:27 AM

Good chapter,It's great how you've remembered it in such detail.

7th Jun 2012, 8:00 AM

Good chapter, but I was never hit once by your arrows, or swords...

7th Jun 2012, 8:45 AM

I figured an arrow or two must of hit with the "stop with the bows faggots".

7th Jun 2012, 2:50 PM

Nope :) It was just annoying, I was nearly hit though :L But you were like 40-50 blocks away

7th Jun 2012, 3:44 PM

My bad for not noticing then u_u

7th Jun 2012, 9:40 AM

who was the fourth person with the dark hair?

7th Jun 2012, 2:51 PM

I'm guessing that was RainbowCats?

8th Jun 2012, 3:56 PM

I like your style and focuse on what you want to accomplisth...saying that could you try and redue this page and make the lines mores smooth. Your ink drawing looks like the rough draft in some places than the final product. I like your style and I am guessing you are working to become a comic book artist so I hope my critcal comments are not that annoying.

9th Jun 2012, 8:14 AM

Appreciate the input.

8th Jul 2012, 2:01 PM

You ever going to work your way back towards spawn? I imagine a lot has changed.

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